Comments on: Business Tag Line (For Blog) Changed

By: laser

laser — Fri, 14 Oct 2011 05:17:59 +0000

nice to read your post again!

I can remember a few weeks after i installed my blog, i can’t count how many times i changed my “tagline” because i was not sure of it, especially when we need to do they “keyword” researches and its competition as well,

Argg..but after half a year, i made a decission about my tagline, and i haven’t changed it for months, i am quite happy with it.

I hope my tagline can be my branding as well though

Thanks for the post!
http://laserpointernews.com/

By: Leigh Fraser

Leigh Fraser — Tue, 21 Jun 2011 08:15:48 +0000

I know that when I was a complete newbie (which I probably am not far away from even now!) a site dedicated to newbies would have been brilliant. And by that I don’t mean a site that was trying to sell me the lates greatest thing. I mean a site that was genuinely trying to help me. Once they gained my trust I might have purchased off them. Give away lots of free information and the sales will come. But most newbies to this market have been fooled by the instant wealth message, and are expecting to make money without spending any. If you hit them up immediately then they will run a mile!

By: Benedict Noel

Benedict Noel — Sat, 11 Jun 2011 03:54:09 +0000

Agree with Don, it’s good to get away from the overly used “Make money on the internet phrase”. It makes me want to steer clear!

By: jason

jason — Mon, 30 May 2011 11:31:35 +0000

You might want to include the specific figure as well?

For example, what is the amount needed to replace a day job? Maybe 3000 per month or 100 per day?

Or maybe even something like ‘$88.75 per day’ to invoke more curiosity?

By: Don

Don — Sat, 07 May 2011 19:56:22 +0000

Good move on your part to get away from the overly used “Make Money On The Internet” phrase that immediately invites skepticism. The word “True” is okay, but “Real” is perhaps a little easier to accept unless you provide numerous testimonials throughout home page. You’re in a tough competitive niche… good luck to you.

By: Ryan

Ryan — Fri, 06 May 2011 01:09:53 +0000

I agree with you on this one, I like the idea of a more specific tagline then the plain old how to make money online…

You might want to say something about the time and freedom aspect of online income?

keep up the good posts

By: Mack

Mack — Thu, 21 Apr 2011 05:01:32 +0000

Targetted and focus is always better for most cases. It is really about identifying what your customers really want and make sure your provide them with relevant valuable services.

By: Mort Fertel

Mort Fertel — Tue, 19 Apr 2011 18:49:56 +0000

“Wellys Proven System To Help You Replace Your Day Job. Watch As He Reveals What It Really Takes To Replace Your Job.”

While I might take issue with some of the verbiage I think your suggestion actually has merit. You’ve suggested twice that if I pay attention I may be able to replace my day job, and you’ve compelled me to take action by using the active verb ‘Watch’.

By: Ray Simon

Ray Simon — Tue, 19 Apr 2011 02:26:00 +0000

Hi Welly,
I agree with what Mike said. You should create a title that includes your name. For example: Welly’s Step by Step System to Replace Your Day Job or 4 Figure per Month Proven System to Replace Your Day Job by Welly Mulia.

Cheers
Ray

By: Adrian Boyle

Adrian Boyle — Sun, 03 Apr 2011 11:56:39 +0000

“I wanted my blog to be different (and shine through) from the rest of the sites, and I wanted to cater to a more specific segment of my audience, which is why I’ve changed the tag line.”

–I agree when you pointed this out. There are a lot of money making websites out there that really sounds like the same to me. It does not appeal to me at all because I would always conclude that they are all the same. Some are even scams!

Changing it up and setting an approach in a different light apart from everyone else’s makes people like me look in to what you are trying to say even more. I might even consider signing up! I think I am your target audience.